i understand that its supposed to be a fast talking auctioneer in the desc, but really...it just looks messed


Caladonian Slave Pits

You are in the middle of a crowded throng of slave-buyers.
To the northwest you can see the huge block upon which the slaves
have been herded up onstage. The auctioneer is belting out a long
harangue of auctioneer speak. "DoIheartwohundredtwohundredfor
thismassivebruteofaslavewitharmsofsteelIseetwohundredtothemaningreen
toIheartwofiftytwofiftytothemanwiththeredhatDoIhearthreehundred
threehundredforthisstrongfineyoungslavethankyouthreehundredDoIhear
threefiftyNothreefiftyComeonefolksthreefiftyAlrightynotakersfor
threefiftyIsaythreehundredgoingonce. Threehundredgoingtwice.
SOLD!Tothemaninyellowsuspendersforthreehundredpleasecomeuptothestage."
Obvious exits: north, west.
You see a hulking marmaluke, two slave masters, a slave trader.

Caladon is split into three sections - the residential section, the upper-class section, and the inner city. I'm working on improving Caladon (making it more friendly, making it a future starting option for several races), and the residential section has gotten most of my attention so far. I wouldn't worry about bars without mobs or specific rooms with crappy descriptions - they're going to get looked over and redone.

hahaha...Finn desc all the way! Finn rules.